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macymagiska112
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hello unreal software
I am a 15 year old music producer. I've been producing music for about 3 years. And i would like some feedback from you guys.

The music is mainly electronic music. But i like to make anything.

https://soundcloud.com/infrasoundofficial/the-man-and-the-machine-teaser-1

This is a teaser for my first album. Its random clips of songs I've made (theyre unfinished)

https://clyp.it/szy31mio <- and heres a pretty calm track. Not finished either.

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Hey, user macymagiska112
Honestly: This isn't bad at all!
You're doing some really interesting stuff in the first one, although I don't get the part at 0:40 - sounds a bit like my-first-practice-on-my-new-e-guitar. Nevertheless I'm really looking forward to get your album as soon as it is finished
The second track is awesome, no kidding! I can see something amazing developing here! Keep at it!

May I ask what program you use? Your strings e.g. are beautiful...

One suggestion for your second “unfinished”-track - if your interested - would be: I like the theme at 0:23. If it would reappear at the end e.g., like a “hook”, it would make the track more catchy. Just one example. Overall you've got some good themes - play with them!

I didn't mentioned yet that I love the dubstep-parts

Good job, keep it up!

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macymagiska112
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user Klirkz has written
Hey, user macymagiska112
Honestly: This isn't bad at all!
You're doing some really interesting stuff in the first one, although I don't get the part at 0:40 - sounds a bit like my-first-practice-on-my-new-e-guitar. Nevertheless I'm really looking forward to get your album as soon as it is finished
The second track is awesome, no kidding! I can see something amazing developing here! Keep at it!

May I ask what program you use? Your strings e.g. are beautiful...

One suggestion for your second “unfinished”-track - if your interested - would be: I like the theme at 0:23. If it would reappear at the end e.g., like a “hook”, it would make the track more catchy. Just one example. Overall you've got some good themes - play with them!

I didn't mentioned yet that I love the dubstep-parts

Good job, keep it up!


Thanks for the feedback!
I use fl studio for everything. For the strings I used Kontakt. Yeah that unfinished track has a shitload of ideas and will probably be 4 minutes long

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The build up is strange.. Ugh, it starts pretty well but then, these vocals ruin everything (including the noisy sound after them).

The drops at 0:55, 1:25 and 1:40, if well used, could make a nice song.

And ugh, https://soundcloud.com/infrasoundofficial/the-real-omfg-hello

Thanks for the feedback!
That second (pop/rock track) is unmastered and unfinished like everything else. They're just sketches.

And for the drops. I'll try as good as I can to put them in the right places. I have a bad routine to make drops and then force myself to make something that fits with them

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Nicely done. I did notice some fl studio work in there with that kick and snare near the end of the song!

Now, the only little flaw I saw was the weird build up at the beginning and that iffy transition to that dubstep part(which was amazing). Either from those, keep up the good work.

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I listened to that "man and machine" thing and it occurred to me that you just took a bunch of songs and put parts of them into one thing. I don't see what's so good about that and it wasn't enjoyable at all for me.

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The re-captcha is reminding me to be kind. So please take no offense, but this is terrible. Trailer or not, if you really feel the need to let someone listen to this, don't do it here.

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DO NOT show your music here, it sucks. People will tell you it's not so bad though.

DO NOT show your music on forums dedicated to composing music - they'll also tell you it's good.

Instead try to collaborate with more or less experienced artist so they'll teach you. Also, music theory, my young padawan, you need it.

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Klirkz
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Come on, guys! Did anyone of you listen to the second one? It's a nice soundtrack with a lot of potential! Of course there was no build up in the first one - it showed off a few parts of his songs and I liked them. (I agree with user _Yank though, that the “noisy”-sound at 0:25 isn't too excellent) If you don't like dubstep it's your problem.

I don't know the program fl studio though. Maybe the “songs” were just some finished loops drag&dropped together somehow, but if that's not the case, I like it. Especially from the last bit at 1:38 (first link) I wanna hear more!

Don't let it get you down, user macymagiska112!

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I haven't listened to your music because the 3G seems to be slow on my actual zone, I'll just expect it to be good and wait until I am able to hear it.

@To any person who decides to post here: he said that he's looking for feedback to learn how to make a better music, if you're going to post that it sucks then build a decent reason or feedback, any other posts are just useless posts.

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@user oxytamine: Haters gonna hate and you're one of them.
@user macymagiska112: Dude, I hate dubstep music, but that not means I hate producers who make this kind of music. It sounds good, keep it up the good work. If do you want to learn more, look on youtube for some tutorials because it'll help you a lot. Myself I learn from them and I started making good rap beats using fl studio, but I don't share my music to others. Anyway, maybe one day I'll share mines too. Another tip : try to make an youtube channel with your music and more people will appreciate your work.
Don't give up, keep ya head up and this good work and if you need some advices, you can contact me via PM or skype.
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