Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kMVuHeiWLiY
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Off Topic My first music - "Path Of Night"My first music - "Path Of Night"
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Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kMVuHeiWLiY
But it's boring. No flair, nothing special. It misses drops, bass, the things that make a song stand out from others so that everyone can recognize it no matter what has been played and what will be played.
But hey, maybe this isn't my style and people love it, who knows. I'm just a human being.
However, as Yates mentioned, it doesn't stand out - it misses something that would make it distinguishable from other songs. It's not bad, but it kinda feels blank. For your first effort, I'd say it's acceptable.
edited 1×, last 19.05.17 02:51:35 pm
Thanks everyone.
Well Done.
With this type of music it's easy to hit or miss when you need to change things up.
I find this better than what most people post when they want us.de users to rate their music so you got that going for you.
I'd add a build up into a second or two of some funky theme after which I'd go for a drop. That kind of music always stands out in my opinion. This would pass for an OST if you fixed the 1:40 part that I mentioned, though.
Good luck.
@ LireyGAMER: Thanks for your opinion, really.
I don't like it, but it's good. The bass is a little too "scratchy" for the ears (I know, the modern 8bit theme etc etc), and the song should end at 3min/3m20s to not overextend the theme (e.g. cut out a part after 2:30).
This is written to become a game OST. No dr0ps needed
PS: You misspelled the word "night" on the cover %)
PPS: Are you going to find any better hosts to upload your music? (hive.co and dropbox?..)
also that bass is really low quality and slightly too loud
edited 1×, last 22.05.17 07:02:48 pm
Raisun has written
I can see this as a soundtrack to some of those wannabe retro pixel games or such, which is not a bad thing.
Yeah, it feels like a soundtrack for some indie game.
It's monotonous a little, but I like it. The cover looks nice, too.
@ Avo: Thanks you, mate.
@ DC: Thanks DC, I got it.
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